The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. My favorite line (I think - so many are profound) is 'to acknowledge I came into this world with nothing...yet possess everything'

Grammatically, one thing bothered me. I think you meant 'you're' instead of 'your'.

Nicely done, so 'on topic'!
This is beautiful. You spoke volumes in so few words. You really grabbed my heart and opened my eyes.

You have a few errors like missing capitals, your should be you're. I think a challenge buddy or a critique group would be perfect for you. You can check the message boards or PM< and I'll help you.

You have such wisdom in these words and if polished a bit I could easily see this in a Christian magazine or even as a devotion. God has blessed you and you need to keep writing and tell the world what God lays on your heart. This really touched me.
10/21/12
Beautiful..this "Blessed" me as I was reading it. Keep writing...you have talent with words..

God Bless, lynn
10/24/12
LOVELY, LOVELY, LOVELY. This was phenomenal, I felt the anointing from your words. God bless~