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Grammatically, one thing bothered me. I think you meant 'you're' instead of 'your'.
Nicely done, so 'on topic'!
You have a few errors like missing capitals, your should be you're. I think a challenge buddy or a critique group would be perfect for you. You can check the message boards or PM< and I'll help you.
You have such wisdom in these words and if polished a bit I could easily see this in a Christian magazine or even as a devotion. God has blessed you and you need to keep writing and tell the world what God lays on your heart. This really touched me.
God Bless, lynn