The Official Writing Challenge
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A lot of sound teaching here. Thanks for sharing your knowledge of God's Word with us.

Colin (Gold Member)
You did a nice job with this mini-sermon. You made some great points and I'm sure many people can relate to them.

Just a couple tiny bits of advice. First doeble space between paragraphs. The white space makes it easier to read on a computer screen. Another thing you might want to do is to pick just one or two verses and expand on them. Sadly, many people will note all of the Bible verse and may just skim over the piece or skip it altogether and it would be sad if people missed your message.

You definitely wrote on topic and gave the reader quite a bit to ponder. I really liked your beginning and it grabbed my attention. I think many of us have wonder what are purpose is. Nice job.
Good Job! Excellent writing and much to think about.

God Bless, lynn
A lot going on in this insightful entry. Nicely done, I enjoyed it. Thank you. God Bless~