The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely beautiful.
Wow! Excellent. You made the transition from her past to the present so well! It is so sad that many people won't sing because of a past bad experience..but God can give us the voice again. I thought you developed all her emotions very well!!:)
Far and away one of the best stories of the week. I could see you in that classroom with your obnoxious teacher poking your diaphragm and intentially humiliating you. I could see you in that congregation longing to praise God, but afraid. And the conclusion--the only thing between you and the cross is a new voice, His! Bravo!