The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/05
This is a powerful poem with a great message, and some good work on rhyme and rhythm. One thing I'd try to avoid: the construction "did ______" (did flow, did roll, did write) is usually awkward and is best avoided.

A top-notch poem that really "sings!"
11/07/05
In the deepest trials of our lives, God always gives a song. Thanks for reminding me of that.
Lovely poem.