The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/05
I'm glad that Teddy's voice found her, but I was disturbed by the implication that he'd been in his apartment for a year. Well-written, though--I read it twice!
11/07/05
not bad. I enjoyed the twist on Teddy. It just proves God can work however He wants, and we just have to be prepared for it.
11/08/05
I found this to be very enlightening in its content, and heartwarming in its reality of life. Nan
Good story! Sincerely left me wanting to read more. I'm a sucker for stories about people who overcome.
the story was easily read, and the story line was clear. I enjoyed the message as well.
Good job. I liked the way you showed your character learning to praise God from one less fortunate than her. Teddy's words were beautiful--God's given me a voice to praise him and he's given me a new friend too.