The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
Sweet...and completely lovely to read. I enjoyed it this well-written entry immensely. Thank you.

God Bless~
09/13/12
Very good story and very well written. Paige was very likable and easy to identify with. The surprise ending was a good touch.

Great work and God bless.
This was truly a delight to read. I'm not usually a big fan of romance stories but you managed to grab my heart with this one.

Just some tiny red ink--when writing okay either spell it out or have both letters in caps OK. I really enjoyed the ending but I think it would have been even stronger if you had left that last line out. It allows the readers to fantasize a bit plus most will come to that conclusion on their own.

You nailed the topic in a cute and fun way. I delighted in your sense of humor. The banter at the end felt natural and made me giggle. I think you did a spectacular job with this piece.
09/20/12
Congratulations! God Bless~