The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
I love how you told us and showed us the MC's emotions. Loved the ending and the realization of the MC. Great job. Thanks.

God bless~
09/13/12
As I was reading your story, I couldn't help but get hungry with the good description of all the food. Also, very good ending... I liked how you turned what could have been a tragedy into something great.

Good work and God bless you.