The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/12
This was a sweet trip down your memory lane. I'm sure you had many mouths watering with your descriptions. There's nothing quite like homemade ice cream too. Nice job.
09/07/12
Your mouthwatering descriptions painted quite a junk food picture, which is good because it gave an actual reason why people like junk food so much. Too bad ice cream has to fall into the junk food category. I love the title here about it being a sweet taskmaster.
Nice little note at the end about eating healthy.
09/11/12
This was a very well written entry. I find these entries not only hard to write (at least for myself) but in reading them. Yours had a life of its own. Your descriptive writing did not cause me to pause once. Very well writen.
09/13/12
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~