The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute poem. I really liked that you managed to include one of my favorite verses. Nice job.
09/07/12
I like that part about "Approach the king this eve, slide and drive through,will temptation then leave?" We can't cut corners with our time with God then expect to resist temptation when it comes. Nice title, wondering about being found out (which of course we all will, whether good or bad)!
I usually don't like poetry but I was caught up in yours, and I loved it. Thank you for reminding me all I have to do is ask for the help.
09/11/12
A very nice, zippy poem to cover the topic very nicely. I enjoyed your poem very much.
09/13/12
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!

God Bless~