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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Junk Food (08/30/12)

TITLE: "Stains"
By Barbara Wasserman
09/04/12


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"Stains"

I will not be able to deny it. The evidence is in too many places.the most embarrassing spot for proof is the stained pages in my bible. The pretty blouse my grand daughter gave me is now soiled. the grease mark stands out like a weed in a beautiful garden. In the pail beside my desk is the empty wrapers and the little bags that once held unnourishing quick grab food items, junk food,the reasons for the stains.

Once again as I sit at my desk and I ask myself,why I didn't get an apple or a banana.I think this while yet another wraper is tossed! Thank goodness the one falling onto the pile is todays first.

I need to get a grip on my taste buds they are like a magnet to junk food. So I will continue to pray and read the bible for encouragement to stop being a junk food junkie.


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 09/06/12
You didn't use many words but you really managed to say quite a bit. You have a few errors that a challenge buddy might help you catch. Though mistakes may be distracting to some, there is still such a huge impact in your words. You took me on a roller coaster of emotions. I get the MC and sometimes myself pray God give me the strength to ask for strength. I felt that's kind of the point where your MC was. Nicely done.
Dannie Hawley 09/07/12
Wow, this has a powerful, present-day message! Yes, in fact, sugar is addicting and the more one has the more the body wants. As with any addiction, the deliverance comes from the Lord, as you have so accurately pointed out. Wrapper has two p's but, perhaps, it is the elderly person writing her account so the error is intentional? Nice job on this article.
Laura Manley09/11/12
I enjoyed your entry and your take on the topic for the week; however, I would like to have seen it a longer entry. I felt short changed. What you did present, however, I enjoyed very much.