The Official Writing Challenge
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You didn't use many words but you really managed to say quite a bit. You have a few errors that a challenge buddy might help you catch. Though mistakes may be distracting to some, there is still such a huge impact in your words. You took me on a roller coaster of emotions. I get the MC and sometimes myself pray God give me the strength to ask for strength. I felt that's kind of the point where your MC was. Nicely done.
09/07/12
Wow, this has a powerful, present-day message! Yes, in fact, sugar is addicting and the more one has the more the body wants. As with any addiction, the deliverance comes from the Lord, as you have so accurately pointed out. Wrapper has two p's but, perhaps, it is the elderly person writing her account so the error is intentional? Nice job on this article.
09/11/12
I enjoyed your entry and your take on the topic for the week; however, I would like to have seen it a longer entry. I felt short changed. What you did present, however, I enjoyed very much.