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Wow - powerful gripping and heart-wrenching. I thought this was prolific in statement and cleverly crafted. Nicely done.

Thank you. God bless~
This is a sweet story. Though this type of story is quite common this week you still were able to intrigue me and make me think how fortunate I am and how my worries seem silly compared to many in other parts of the world.

I noticed a couple of tiny typos like hassle instead of hussle Great job of storytelling and isle (which means island) and aisle. A challenge buddy might help you catch those typos.

You did a nice job of writing on topic while really opening the reader's eyes to the world we can't or won't always see. This is a nice piece of writing.
This is touching and has a good message. You did a good job of showing the need and the way God supplied it -- and all for free!
Congrats...God bless