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This story made me smile and cry at the same time. It had my attention from beginning to end. You set up a conflict immediately and resolved it by the end with aplomb. Loved it. It was warm and touching.

Excellent! God bless~
This is a delightful story. I love how God finds just the right people who can help each other through the pain and hurt encountered in life. And some people don't believe in miracles. Tah! Great job of building these delightful characters.
This is a great story. I enjoyed it immensely. You managed to relate it all to topic, and gave it a great message of compassion and love. Good job!
This has a very powerful lesson in it about what it truly means to be a Christian. Great message.
Congrats...God bless
This was a delightful and very touching story of how God works. He not only blessed the little girl and her Mom but the grocer and his wife.

I truly enjoyed this story and am thrilled that it won first place. You deserve it! I look forward to reading more of your work.