The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. I found myself really immersed in it. You did a good job of building the suspense.

I noticed a couple of tiny typos like a missing quotation mark at the end. No biggies though.

You handled the topic in a fun and fresh way. I really liked how the husband knew enough to decorate it in the wedding colors.
08/16/12
This was so cute, I really enjoyed it. It was different, and I loved the romantic part of it...the colors of the wedding. Great job. Thanks. God bless~
08/17/12
This story had a nice pace and held my interest to the end. The romantic sprinklings towards the conclusion made me smile.
I owe you an apology. I was rereading your story and there were not any missing quotation marks. I'm not sure if my blurry vision made me think that or perhaps I was thinking of a different story. I am truly sorry.
08/18/12
A sweet story and very on topic. Good writing.
08/23/12
Congratulations! God Bless~