The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful story. I always like it when people pray in the stories because it shows how to have an intimate relationship with Jesus. Your story will bless more people than you can imagine.
08/16/12
Awww...this story touched my heart. It was well written and elicited emotional feelings that will be felt by many.

Thank you. God bless~
08/16/12
I've been to both types of banquets too - where the emphasis is either on the food and decorations, or on the reason for the gathering.

A little red ink on your ending - you began at the fancy banquet, but you ended like you were at the hero's banquet.

I got a warm fuzzy from this story. And a lesson is there, too, so subtle that we don't realize you've taught us something. Nice job.
08/17/12
What a beautiful story. I like how you were attending the banquet for the mayor, then flashed back to the one Stephanie had gone to for her brother. You spoke volumes in your entry and it really moved me.
08/23/12
Congratulations! God Bless~