The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/12
Beautiful conclusion...that said it all and touched my heart. Nicely done.

Thanks. God bless~
08/16/12
Your concluding verse is one I try to remember. But in the face of the adversary, in a very public venue, it's hard, isn't it? You gave us some great truths to think about.
08/16/12
There's much to chew on in this, an important message for us all when it comes to sharing our faith. Thanks for sharing.
You did a fantastic job in this well-written devotion. It is so important to start with a story that most everyone can relate to. You set the perfect scene for this topic.

The main thing I might suggest is to do more showing. Sometimes people find it harder to show in a devotion or a Bible Study. Just by switching the beginning a tad, you can paint a picture. My friend called to tell me that she and her husband received the invitation of invitations. Her voice bubbled over with excitement as she rapidly relayed the details to me, words mixed with giggles. Hopefully this shows how she was excited to go and that this is an important event.

You did a beautiful job of showing how important it is to stand up for our beliefs. It's not always easy but it is something important that we all need to be reminded of. You managed to express yourself, back it up with scripture, and do all of this without coming off as preachy. This is a delightful read from beginning to end!
Such a great message. It takes constant vigilance and effort to live our whole lives as a glory to God. Thanks for this reminder.