The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful story! It's comforting to know that Jesus gives us all a fresh start!
11/01/05
You wrote this so well! I was there with him and forgot that it was taking place so long ago. Very nice.
11/01/05
I love it when Bible stories are "filled in". Thanks for this most enjoyable read.
11/01/05
Good job on this Bible story. You drew me right in.
11/02/05
You touched an area with
humanity in your article. Well done. What Christ accomplishes for us in giving us a new lease on life is so awesome. Great article.
11/02/05
Extremely well-written.
11/03/05
I agree about the filling in. Especially how neatly this was described, and I didn't realize it til the mid-section that it was even a Bible story. Very good! God bless ya, littlelight
11/03/05
I agree. I was completely caught up in the story before realizing it was Biblically based. Good writing!
11/04/05
Well done. You gave the story a fresh look.