The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
Almost predictable, until the very end. A couple of edits and this one goes a long way. Thanks.
11/01/05
I enjoyed this. It held my attention all the way through. Good job.
11/01/05
definetely written with a teenage audience in mind.. Thank you for sharing.djdeb
11/02/05
Jason is written very realistically--I know teens like him! Glad to see how he turned out.
11/03/05
I really liked this. It is so realistic. I enjoyed how the story unfolded in the nursing home, and how it changed Jason's heart. God is so good! God bless ya, littlelight
11/05/05
This was well-written. Thought-provoking. I used to go to a nursing home, and even though it does smell at times, the visits with the elderly is pleasant and fun!
11/07/05
Hi Larry. I just wanted to pop in very quickly and let you know that you ranked 7th in the Level 1 list for the Fragrance Challenge. There were a lot of entries for that level, so you deserve a pat on the back for rating so highly. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)