The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
Excellent finish! Good dialogue, was able to sympathize with character and even got mad at the wife for such an instant and absolute reaction to his despair driven mistake. I liked the scene of confusion when the temptress came but I struggled with the tender words at that time. still, I believe it was my anger towards the wife that made the finish feel so good. God forgives what humans cannot. We cannot outsin God. Thank you for sharing...God bless and keep writing.
11/01/05
I loved the next to the last line. Great ending!
11/01/05
Very well done, and I agree the ending is the cruncher. Top notch. Thanks.
11/02/05
Very, very good! Thanks for the unexpected ending.
11/03/05
I think there is scripture in Proverbs about that woman (LOL)
I wasn't mad at Leah, I found I wasn't mad at her husband. I guess I'm a little whacky but I had faith in God, no matter how hopeless the situation seemed. I liked the ending especially. Nice job! God bless ya, littlelight