The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/12
A very nicely-written story of probably 90% of the population, at least in the States; obsession with food and how we can avoid it or deal properly with it. I found your entry quite interesting and thoroughly enjoyed the poem you wrote at the end of it. Nice writing!
08/10/12
Very nice entry and well written. It held a significant meaning which many will relate to. Thank you. God bless~
I liked the messages of this entry. So often we do not understand why we are going through what we go through until we pass through it and have grown. The other message of self-discipline to give God the glory is often missed by many people...believers and non-believers.

This was clearly on topic. Good job.
08/13/12
Good point with this: we must touch food, but temperance is the key. How easy it would be to just avoid it entirely (but then fasting makes a body weak, so doing it to lose weight serves no real purpose).
This is a great devotion. I like how you started out with something a lot of people can relate to. Then you took that example and showed us how God does care for our needs. Nice job.
08/16/12
Congratultions! God bless~
08/16/12
Congratulations on your win! This was absolutely great!