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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Savory to the Taste (07/26/12)

TITLE: I'm Ready For Meat
By Gail Burks
07/30/12


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I started with milk, now
I'm ready for meat.
Let me glean from your table, Lord, because it's
Savory to the taste.

I'm tired of messing up.
I'm tired of the slips.
Let me bow down before you with prayer --- it's
Savory to the taste.

No more time to waste.
No more games to play.
Let me speak only truth that is
Savory to the taste.

I'm stronger now, and better, too.
I'm pressing toward the mark.
Hitting the bulls eye, taking a stand. Jesus, you are
Savory to the taste.

The road has been long.
The mountains quite steep.
Embracing the promise, oh, how sweet, and
Savory to the taste.

Your wisdom and favor follow me.
Your anointing and glory envelop me.
Thank you, God, for your great mercy, it's
Savory to the taste.


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pam Leitermann08/02/12
Great job I enjoyed it very much
Laura Manley08/02/12
This was a well developed poem wherein you spoke of the topic for this week. It held a lot of messages in it while being very rhythmic.
Nancy Bucca 08/03/12
I think you caught the gist of this challenge. Very nice, and easy read, and so well written! Good job.
A B08/03/12
I really enjoyed this entry, thought provoking and honest.
CD Swanson 08/05/12
Awww. I loved this poem. It was sweet and powerful at once. Thanks. God bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 08/06/12
This is a lovely piece. Your repetition really drives the message home. Your words are beautiful and flow off the tongue.
CD Swanson 08/09/12
CONGRATS!!!!

God bless~
A B08/09/12
Congrats and well done.