The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/12
Oh so beautiful! This well written piece glorifying the Lord and presenting on topic at the same time was perfect.


Thank you. God Bless~
I really enjoyed your descriptions of all the foods and fellowships. There is something special about gatherings like that and you did a nice job of bringing it out.
You even added a tiny bit of a conflict with the mysterious dish.

Make sure you write out things like Brother instead of using the abbreviation.

You were definitely on topic and I enjoyed the way you took me back in years to where someone would make homemade cottage cheese. Good job.
08/01/12
I loved this! and here it is lunch and you made me so hungry for home cooking! I just go have my usual sandwich now...ho hum...

Excellent, beautiful story and writing!
God Bless!

Congratulations for your ribbon and for placing 18 overall!
08/02/12
Beautiful. Your Homecoming gathering reminded me of my own family gathering for Decoration Day. And the food, why it would have fit right in on the tables in Alabama. Great job. Congratulations.
08/03/12
What a great story Ruth. I could taste the flavours and the sweet felllowship was tangible. Focus was on Jesus. What more could a winning story want! C
Congratulations.