The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a charming poem about all the pitfalls and good things about a potluck. I'm sure it wasn't easy to find just the right rhymes and words to make it flow. Good job.
07/27/12
Great job with the topic in this lovely, beautiful and smooth flowing poem. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you!

God Bless~
07/28/12
This is a lovely poem. It reminds me of lunches with my family; each aunt had a special dish to bring, nana always did her jelly cakes amid other delightful treats. Well done on a lovely entry.
07/29/12
You were right on topic with this delightful poem which certainly expressed the good and the bad about potlucks. Nicely written.
I liked this poem. I especially liked it from about the middle and down. that part in the middle where you talked about family reunion pot lucks, was too cute.
08/01/12
Very nice poem, I really enjoyed your rhythem and rhyme, and the story it told. Loved it!

God Bless
08/01/12
Very nice poem, I really enjoyed your rhythem and rhyme, and the story it told. Loved it!

God Bless
08/01/12
Very nice poem, I really enjoyed your rhythem and rhyme, and the story it told. Loved it!

God Bless
08/01/12
Very nice poem, I really enjoyed your rhythem and rhyme, and the story it told. Loved it!

God Bless