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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Potluck (Meal or Gathering) Deadline 7-26-12 @ 10 AM NY Time (07/19/12)

TITLE: The Pot Luck
By Connie K Cameron
07/19/12


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Hey, lets have a pot luck
Tell all of your good friends
Invite your Mom and sister
Please stay until the end

Come see this guy who's talking
About some fishy things
Like love and peace and patience
But true, his story rings

Fill up on all his good food
Your kids are welcome too
Take a seat on the grass
He's all the rage, he's new

Your stomach he will satisfy
Your pocket book won't ache
Plus I get the feeling
He's doing it for our sake

Please just take some time
And listen to his pitch
I've heard the blind are seeing
Wow, he must be getting rich

I think I might just follow him
He's asked me to go along
My heart feels somewhat different
Is he ending with a song?

Today I start a new life
With Jesus by my side
We'll walk and spread the Gospel
And in me, God abides

It might sound kind of strange
To give to God your heart
But dying, now is living
And ending, Brings a brand new start


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Laura Manley07/26/12
What a marvelous poem to show what the following of Jesus can bring forth. There are a couple places where the rhythm of your poems seems off somewhat; however, the message of the poem speaks louder than the rhythm. So very nicely done.
CD Swanson 07/26/12
This was so beautiful. I loved the message and the words. Great job with the topic. Thanks. God Bless~
lynn gipson 07/29/12
I loved this...beautiful poem and well written. You said it all so easily! God Bless

Lynn
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/29/12
This is a lovely poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhymes. it flowed with ease and was an enjoyable read.