The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/12
What a marvelous poem to show what the following of Jesus can bring forth. There are a couple places where the rhythm of your poems seems off somewhat; however, the message of the poem speaks louder than the rhythm. So very nicely done.
07/26/12
This was so beautiful. I loved the message and the words. Great job with the topic. Thanks. God Bless~
07/29/12
I loved this...beautiful poem and well written. You said it all so easily! God Bless

Lynn
This is a lovely poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhymes. it flowed with ease and was an enjoyable read.