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I really enjoyed this story and could relate to the MC. Somehow over the last 20 years, my husband's beliefs have changed. When that happens and the marriage feels stale, Satan will jump at the opportunity.Your ending is perfect--give the problem to God. He can handle it!
07/20/12
This happens all the time...the other day my daughter in law told me her marriage was getting bland..so now I pray for her! And my son. I loved this story, very well written too!
07/20/12
I pray the Lord hears the MC's prayers. Good job of showing "life" as it unravels and how the enemy waits for opportune moments to fester and provoke ones emotions. Well written and very good message.


God bless~
07/20/12
I enjoyed this story and its important message very much! :)
07/20/12
I had a special interest in your MC's plight since I am married to an unbeliever. The sceanrio has never happened to me but I would hope I would and could avoid it if it presented itself. This has such a good message to it. God bless you! Excellent writing.
07/26/12
Congrats! God Bless~