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Topic: PICNIC - deadline 7-12-12 @ 9:59 AM NY Time (07/05/12)
TITLE: The Fish are Jumping!
By LaRue Kendrick
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The evening started out peaceful and calm. There was a cool breeze blowing which also kept the flies and mosquitoes away. The air was cooling from a day of summer heat, and the evening air was refreshing. There was the sound of the water lapping up onto the narrow, sandy edge of the nearby fishing pond.
The three brothers and families had gotten together for an evening of food and fresh air down at the river. Everyone had been to the water’s edge to see if the fish were jumping yet. They usually started coming to the surface for bugs about this time of evening. It was just a bit early evidently because there weren’t any emanating rings on the water where a fish might have broken the surface.
As the ladies went about getting food out of baskets, the men positioned a picnic table so it would not wobble back and forth on the uneven ground. In order to have all four legs of the table all touching the ground at the same time, the table sat at a bit of an angle; one bench seat higher than the other seat. The men figured this would work just fine. The slope wasn’t so much that the food would slide across the table top.
When all the food was displayed, paper plates and cups passed around and table grace said, the family members each filled their plates with such offerings as sliced water melon, ripe plums, potato salad, fruit salad, chips, ham and cheese for sandwiches and pickles. Large thermos jugs held tea or cold water.
As each person found a spot on one or the other of the attached table benches, it so happened that the heavier brothers and one wife sat on the upper bench and the lighter brother, his wife and a couple of the young people sat on the lower bench. This worked just fine until the heaviest brother happened to catch sight of a fish rising out of the water. Being an avid fisherman, this immediately took precedence over the meal. He hastily stood up, stepped over the bench and said, “The fish are jumping!” At that the other heavier brother and his wife stood up and slid off of the bench to see for themselves. Of course the young kids immediately jumped up as well to get a look at the watched-for phenomenon. This left the leaner brother and his wife still seated on the lower bench. Well, you guessed it, the table tipped right over, laying them on their backs with the evening’s supper covering them from head to waist.
When the other folks realized what had happened, they all rushed to right the table and uncover the two water melon-pickle juice-potato salad-covered couple. Some thought the scene quite hilarious in seeing the aunt’s face sporting a potato chip nicely stuck to her face with a smear of pickle juice and water melon seeds adorning the uncle’s face. No one was hurt at all, except for pride. Upon returning to the upright position, the brother looked at his food-stained wife and said, “Well, that wasn’t so bad, was it Mom?” To which she replied, “It sure wasn’t so good!” A good time was had by all, and the fish did indeed perform with much rising and splashing in the pond. A few of them were even caught!
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