The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
Interesting that this was put into verse, a strong message for everyone. Thank you for posting.
11/02/05
Hi, I think I know you!
Nicely done, I think though the 5th frame broke up the pace. I had to pause. Other than that good thoughts, and message. God bless ya, littlelight
Very interesting message in this one. I like the ABCB DEFE rhyme scheme ALL THE TIME. Great job! THanks for sharing!
11/02/05
Good job on rhyme; work on rhythm and meter. Very good lesson in this poem!
11/02/05
I liked the way you used "fragrance" to identify each individual and how they REALLY smell. I've known quite a few who smell pretty bad! LOL Very nice poetry which brings forth a true message. Good job!
11/03/05
This is a great concept - giving us all a fragrance! Loved the first four verses especially.
Creative use of the topic. Especially enjoyed the concept that we each have our own fragrance (totally unrelated to personal hygiene LOL) that can be 'read' by others. Some work on rhythm and meter and this could be a winner. Well done.
11/09/05
This is a really reaching out article, to those new to the faith or those that know people in Christ.
You have a gift for reaching out and a natural talent.
Keep glorifying God girl! Cause it's working!
:D

BTW; thanks for the comments on my article for this week. It's all true (for once) and I'm always glad to hear positive things.

Love and Blessings!
B Brenton