The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/12
The wonderful gift of life! And the wonderful gift of your delightful words...I love this one!!
This is really lovely. I loved the analogy between feasting on food and feasting on God's words and his creations. I think some of my most powerful moments have been lying on a blanket and staring at the clouds or stars. god is able to speak volumes in the silence.
07/12/12
Beautifully done. Thank you!
07/13/12
This was filled with so many emotions and truths. I loved it. Thank you. Great job.

God bless~
07/15/12
Very tender and romantic! I like the poetic, thoughtful style.

(Just a note: I think you should use "lie" instead of "lay" in a couple places.)
07/16/12
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it.