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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: PICNIC - deadline 7-12-12 @ 9:59 AM NY Time (07/05/12)

TITLE: Delightful Place
By
07/09/12


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Your love has captured my heart
We lay gently among the flowers
Touching each other's hearts
Through poetic rhymes
A day of endearing hope
Breathing in the fragrance
The breeze gracefully flows
Trees dancing in the distance
Leaves touching the sky
Clouds puffing up the horizon
As we gaze and feed our emotions
God has blessed us
Our glorious pasture of blooms
Not just of flowers but of our love
As we lay peacefully among his creations
To feel each moment that passes
Is but a wonderful gift of life
And we hunger as we set the blanket
Out end to end in the middle of the meadow
Reaching for the basket
Filled with jars of delicacy
Honey and fruit to fill our needs
Our daily bread to nourish our souls
This is our time to reminisce
How great is our God
That He gave to us this
Delightful place to have the perfect picnic


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lynn gipson 07/12/12
The wonderful gift of life! And the wonderful gift of your delightful words...I love this one!!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/12/12
This is really lovely. I loved the analogy between feasting on food and feasting on God's words and his creations. I think some of my most powerful moments have been lying on a blanket and staring at the clouds or stars. god is able to speak volumes in the silence.
Jody Day 07/12/12
Beautifully done. Thank you!
Camille (C D) Swanson 07/13/12
This was filled with so many emotions and truths. I loved it. Thank you. Great job.

God bless~
Myrna Noyes07/15/12
Very tender and romantic! I like the poetic, thoughtful style.

(Just a note: I think you should use "lie" instead of "lay" in a couple places.)
Adele Butler07/16/12
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it.