The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this! It's very unique, and I had to read it a few times to be sure I "got" it. My favorite line is from the Chronicles: "...sadly, she returned forgiveness already given." That's powerful!

Well done all around.
I loved this, wow, totally "out of the box" style. Such creativity and balance. Read it three times. Blessings - dub
I read once, slowly. Very interesting journal. Kept my attention from beginning to end. Nice work. God bless ya, littlelight
This was very interesting to read. I could relate to a lot of her thoughts and feelings. I liked the last part, but it was a little confusing to me to use different names than those the main character had used. Over all, good job.
A really engaging entry. Loved the thumbnail sketches of the characters and the natural way she talked to the Lord. Yeggy
Wow! To be honest before God! Might as well. He knows our heart! Delightful reading!
Her conversations with the Lord were very real, and the kind of thing that we all too often end up thinking when we are meant to be praying! :) Karen
This was such a joy to read. With a wonderful message too. Blessings.
Very creative and imaginative. Loved the thought that had gone into the charcters' names. Enjoyed this so much. Thanks for sharing.
Great job!
Thanks for a refreshingly original piece! The prayers/thoughts Megan had were great. A little more editing would have caught some little grammar distractions, but overall a great job!
Very very nice!! Good lesson in that you never know what's in another's heart -but God does!
Congratulations, Deni!!! First in your division - woo hoo!!! This is great - I could see it / smell it / really enter into it. Wonderful.
Deni, we were thrilled to see you place 1st in the Level 1 awards. The Aussie/Kiwi contingent did very well this week. You also ranked 13th overall (out of 145 entries), so give yourself a huge pat on the back. That's excellent for anyone - let alone a Level 1 entrant.

As you've already realized, it's time for you to mosey on up to Level 2. You're more than ready for it.

Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
I could really relate to this. I got just a little confused in spots, but I liked this!