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06/18/12
All the focus on the physical heart these days is important, but you've touched on what is TRULY critical. Well done.
06/20/12
Very clever use of the topic in this well written entry. I thought it was powerful and will touch many readers hearts. Thank you.

God Bless~
This is a beautiful piece. You have so many powerful truths in here3. lately as one phase of my life is ending, I've found that I am having panic attacks and fear dying. Your line about the two hearts gave me a sense of hope I haven't felt in weeks.

Make sure if you use any scriptures that you cite them as well as state which translation the quote is from.

This is certainly on topic. I love the last line. You packed a lot of power and wisdom into 6 words.
06/25/12
Very well written, and a lot of truths by which to live. I like the way you looked at both aspects of the heart; physical and spiritual. Very well done!