The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
It's a lovely memory. Add a few descriptive passages to your dialog to "flesh out" the story a bit and to help put your readers in there with your main character. Good writing!
11/01/05
Very nice! I enjoyed reading it all:)
11/01/05
Very nice read. You might add a little support to the dialog, called beats - helps with the descriptions.
11/02/05
I liked the memory circling back around with the honeysuckle and the carriage. Nice writing. God bless ya, littlelight