The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/12
You took this reader from her little corner of the world where life seems to carry on no matter what and took me into a life of helping two characters get their lives back on track. I absolutely love the title you chose for the article. As I have so many writers this week, I would caution you to use spell check. It sees a world of misspellings and will indicate to the writer just where they need to make changes. This was an excellent storyline and truly can be considered a "current affair."
AWWWWWWWW. This was SOOOO sweet!
06/12/12
This is good!

The ending felt a but rushed. Perhaps you realized you were running out of words, and had to get to the ending quickly. :) I never do a word check until the end,then I cut out from the story here and there... Some from the beginning, some from the middle, and some from the end. That way, the story as a whole still flows and doesn't feel quite as rushed.
06/12/12
This is good!

The ending felt a but rushed. Perhaps you realized you were running out of words, and had to get to the ending quickly. :) I never do a word check until the end,then I cut out from the story here and there... Some from the beginning, some from the middle, and some from the end. That way, the story as a whole still flows and doesn't feel quite as rushed.
06/12/12
Gah! Sorry for the double post. I also meant to say that I loved the story line. Keep writing!