The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/12
This certainly was an original take on this week's Challenge topic. My only suggestion to you is that you double space your paragraphs. It is difficult to follow the story when it is single spaced. I think you had a great story involving the birds trying to get the attention of the humans referred to. Wouldn't it be nice if birds could speak on behalf of Jesus? Very nicely done!
06/10/12
This is fun, and yet has a great message. Space between paragraphs would make it even more enjoyable to read. I liked this entry a lot.
06/13/12
This is about the cutest thing I ever did read...Seriously, my favorite yet. God bless and great writing!
06/14/12
This is really neat, written from a bird's perspective, and so creative too. I liked it very much.