The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/12
This entry was appealing in the sense that you brought forth so many ways we as humans rely on ourselves and not to God to provide for our needs. I think your title was very appropriate. I would encourage you to proof your work a little more closely as I found a few errors in accidentally using one wowrd when I know you meant another, like "of" for "our." Also, other than I believe the last paragraph, you did not space between paragraphs. This was a very nicely written entry and I enjoyed it from beginning to end.