The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/12
Great point illustrated here. That there is a "legal age" limit...and clearly they were "under" the limit. Well written with an important message for all. I'm easy, just hand me a pink lemonade, or Dasani water! LOL.

Nice job. Thanks.

God bless~
I like your story and the theme of it is quite clear. It breaks my hearts that parents will say something stupid like "If she's gonna drink anyway, I'd rather have her do it at home." I don't know how many kids in my small community have almost died from alcohol poisoning. The only thing I might have liked to see is not a citation but an actual arrest. Parents need to know if kids consume alcohol on your property you stand the risk of being sued and losing everything including your freedom because you would go to jail for quite some time. I applaud you for writing this now. This is the time of year where something always rocks the community. You did a great job from beginning to end.