The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
Good job with the topic and a well written entry. Thank you. I liked this short, but powerful piece.

God Bless~
06/04/12
These definitely are great questions. I'll be pondering them for a while. Great message too! Thanks.
06/04/12
You did a nice job of pulling out famous questions of the Bible.

In spots I had trouble with the flow, I'm not sure how you would fix I just know I stumbled. Someone once suggested to me to have someone read my work aloud. If they stumble over a sentence then I should work on rewording it.

You did a nice job of staying true to the topic. I also like pieces that make me stop and think or pull out my Bible and explore more on my own. Nice job.
06/07/12
This is well written. My only problem is that the last question isn't from God and reads like a guilt trip.

You have a great talent and I hope you continue to refine it.