The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job with the topic and a well written entry. Thank you. I liked this short, but powerful piece.

God Bless~
These definitely are great questions. I'll be pondering them for a while. Great message too! Thanks.
You did a nice job of pulling out famous questions of the Bible.

In spots I had trouble with the flow, I'm not sure how you would fix I just know I stumbled. Someone once suggested to me to have someone read my work aloud. If they stumble over a sentence then I should work on rewording it.

You did a nice job of staying true to the topic. I also like pieces that make me stop and think or pull out my Bible and explore more on my own. Nice job.
This is well written. My only problem is that the last question isn't from God and reads like a guilt trip.

You have a great talent and I hope you continue to refine it.