The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
Beautiful and meaningful piece. I loved the scriptures, and the tone of the entry. Good job. Thanks.
God bless~
This is a beautiful mini sermon. You did a great job of asking questions that may have many different answers to it.

The main thing I would recommend is to include where the quoted verses can be found in the Bible. That way if a reader wants to hear more, he'll know where to look.

You did a nice job of presenting your view while asking the reader to look into his own heart. Good job.