The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
I enjoyed this well written and powerful entry. Nicely done. I am sure many people at one time or another faced those thoughts in their heads. Thank you for this. God bless~
You have a natural flair for words that brings the reader right into the story. Great job.
This is lovely. I'll admit when I read the opening line, I groaned a bit thinking another story of the same thing. But then you surprised me and tried to answer these questions in a totally different way. I love the POV of Mrs. Job. I think it is quite clever and really makes one stop to think. The only red ink I have for you is if quoting a song make sure it is not copyright protected (most hymns are in public domain but best to check for sure) and also make sure you credit the composer/author of any material you quote. Other than that tiny bit I think you did a fantastic job on this piece and I thoroughly enjoyed it.