The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem flowed so effortlessly, and almost had a melodious "sound." Loved it. Beautifully done. Thank you. God Bless~
Just absolutely lovely. Yes, there is that distance, thank God for sending Jesus to close the gap.
Loved it!
This is lovely and has some great underlying messages.
So simple and yet so profound at the same time. Really easy to read and so very easy to understand, (some poetry is so cryptic I just don't get it!).

My only question is regarding the word 'god' in the last line; was that intentionally lower case, or should it have been "God"?

I truly love this beautiful poem. Well done.
Hi, me again! I've just realised, the entire poem is written in lower case, so ignore my last comment! Well, just the part about the capital G!

Blessings, Helen
Good poetry. I also prefer to see God spelled with a capitol G. Otherwise great job. Keep up the good work.
WOW! I missed this one before the winners were announced. You have poet all over you and this was
absolutely Beautiful!!

I looke forward to more.
Congrats! God Bless~