The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
This poem flowed so effortlessly, and almost had a melodious "sound." Loved it. Beautifully done. Thank you. God Bless~
Just absolutely lovely. Yes, there is that distance, thank God for sending Jesus to close the gap.
Loved it!
This is lovely and has some great underlying messages.
06/02/12
So simple and yet so profound at the same time. Really easy to read and so very easy to understand, (some poetry is so cryptic I just don't get it!).

My only question is regarding the word 'god' in the last line; was that intentionally lower case, or should it have been "God"?

I truly love this beautiful poem. Well done.
06/02/12
Hi, me again! I've just realised, the entire poem is written in lower case, so ignore my last comment! Well, just the part about the capital G!

Blessings, Helen
06/06/12
Good poetry. I also prefer to see God spelled with a capitol G. Otherwise great job. Keep up the good work.
06/07/12
WOW! I missed this one before the winners were announced. You have poet all over you and this was
absolutely Beautiful!!

I looke forward to more.
06/07/12
Congrats! God Bless~