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05/24/12
I pray that trust eventually will wipe away the vivid images until they are hazy...with God all things are possible. And, holding on to Jesus, I pray the MC will eventually be able to go forward with confidence and joy knowing Jesus will never desert her.

Well written and powerfully executed. Thank you.

God bless you~
Wow this is a powerful piece. You grabbed my attention right at the beginning and held it through the end.

You had a few minor typos like starred instead of stared but that's no biggie.

I could really relate to the MC. I have a hard time trusting men as well. You gave me a glimmer of hope to cling to. This is a great devotion.
CONGRATULATIONS happy dance!
05/31/12
Congratulations! God Bless~