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11/01/05
Nice thoughts! I would watch the runons and maybe cut some extra words that don't add to it. Thanks!:)
11/01/05
Interesting comentary, watch the tense shifts, runons and other nit picky grammar thingies. Perhaps have someone read over your work before posting. Personally, I dislike the smell of burning leaves...probably cause I am alergic to smoke.
blessings - dub
11/01/05
I just like the smell of leaves in the fall. I more like the colors (LOL) Nice story and seems like a perfectly wonderful day! Thank you for sharing it with us. God bless ya, littlelight
11/02/05
This is a charming story; I love your playfulness. A few spellings that stood out: subconconscious / sub-conscience and surname / sir name. Loads of fun!
11/03/05
Well good grief, I spelled "subconscious" wrong in my comment. Sorry. That word should be outlawed.