The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/12
I liked this very much. We all seem to be looking for answers. Keep writing your on the right track
05/24/12
Great job with this poem. I loved the story it told, and the powerful scriptures throughout. God Bless~
This is a cute poem that encompasses many of the heroes of the Bible. You did a nice job with the rhyming and the flow.

The only thing I might suggest is some commas to help the reader understand some of the lines easier. Esp. this line An angel came his hand to stay. could use a comma after came.

That's just a tiny little detail though and did not detract from your message. You did a nice job on this.