The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/12
A simply powerful poem and entry. Good job with the topic. Thank you.

God bless~
I don't read poetry because most of the time I can't make heads or tails of it. Yours on the other hand is outstanding. It was as if you knew me and my attitude. Beautifully done!
I really liked this a lot. I often write poems similar to this. I have no doubt that the Holy Spirit is flowing through my pen. I believe you experienced a similar thing when you wrote down what God said to you.

Some of the lines and rhymes felt a tad forced or awkward but a poem is something that is never finished. I know I'll dig out some I wrote years ago and tweak them a bit.

Your message is beautiful and I think you are so blessed to know that God does speak to your heart. I also admire that you don't keep these words to yourself but want to share them with the world so anyone who reads this will also be touched by God.