The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/12
This was a well written and engaging entry. It certainly was fully on topic.

Great job. God Bless~
This is a really sweet story. It made me smile to picture the boys and the frogs.

Be careful of little errors like having incomplete sentences (your first line is an example)also I noticed sometimes you would capitalize the he said after a quote and that is all part of one sentence. A good proofreader could really help you catch these little things.

The take on the topic was fresh and fun. You did a creative, fun take with this story.
05/30/12
Really cute, creative, and right on target with the theme. Good job.