The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an endearing story...The young MC, although she got into trouble...she had a big heart to try and help that child. I liked that she learned that the only way to handle life with with GOD, and through prayer.

Good job, and well written.

God bless~
This is a clever take on the story. I never had thought about the warning signs so this was a fresh take on the topic. God also gives us warning signs, and most of us tend to ignore them from time to time. I also liked how you Started with a personal story and then related it to the Bible.
The MC was trying to help someone, and what a heart she had...I really liked this, God Bless
Well done and right on theme. I think this would be a great devotional. Good job.
YAY! Congratulations! HAPPY DANCE!
Congratulations on your winning article! Nice work...

Wing His Words!
Congratulations on your 1st place finish ... and on moving up to the Intermediate level!
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congrats on placing 30th overall! Happy Dance! (again :))
Way to go! I knew you had it in you! Now, let's see you top this one with another move up the ladder.
Thank you for the First Place. I couldn't have done it without Shann Hall Lochman Van BenKommen (sp?) She was my editor on this one. Half the credit goes to her!