The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/12
Oh my gosh...I loved this poem. The ending was powerfully executed, and so true. It touched my heart.

Thank you.

Gob bless~
I really enjoyed this sweet poem. You did a nice job with relating to all ages.

The only thing I might suggest would to break it in to smaller stanzas to give the reader that all important white space.

I think you did a beautiful job.
05/30/12
Very well done. Loved this one. Reads like the lyrics of a song.