The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/12
Good job with this entry. I enjoyed the entire piece. And, I especially LOVED the last line...that delivered a powerful message.

Thank you. God Bless~
This is quite beautiful. How true your words are. There were a couple of spots I had to reread. Adding a comma on the line about the book, firmly closed, after the word closed would help the flow.The last line was exquisite.I really enjoyed this.
05/29/12
well written and interesting. God Bless
05/30/12
Beautiful! Thank you for a compelling message.