The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/12
I think you have been reading my mail from the early years...This is wonderful....thanks for reminding me the past is past. God Bless!
05/24/12
Nice job with this poem that delivered a powerful message and a beautiful flow.

I enjoyed this. God Bless~
This is beautiful. I think many people will think you are speaking directly to them. I also wonder if God has rescued you or someone close from some of these exact pitfalls, because you do such an outstanding job of sharing the pain. Thanks for sharing.
05/30/12
Good job being on target with the theme. This is a powerful message on a subject quite relevant. It reads like a contemporary song.

Nicely done.