The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/12
I love the scripture that started off this well written entry. It held my heart throughout. Nicely done. This is my fav:

"As channels of Jesus’ life (John 15:5), we light up a dark world with God’s love."

Amen & Amen.

Thanks for this piece.

God Bless~
This is a lovely devotion. I like the points you made and how you defended them. Nicely done.
05/20/12
Really excellent piece of writing, I was surprised to see it in the Beginner's level since it is very well crafted.

I did spot one typo/misspelling in the last paragraph-- believer
(believe me, I've done that before LOL)

But really, this is an excellent job and if you're not blogging you should be.
05/22/12
Very well done. This would make a nice devotional. Good job.