The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/12
I love the title!

Thank you for this tender journey through the MC's mind and heart. It was perfectly on topic.

I liked the epiphany that sounded in her mind as she looked in the "mirror." Great significance in that whole scene. Great job.

God bless~
This is a great story. You did a nice job of building the conflict. I liked that you showed how one can go home again. Sure things aren't always the same but home welcomes us with open arms.
05/19/12
You have made me love the MC in both worlds. A wonderful story.

Keep writing!
05/20/12
This story is a real gem.

The way you lead into the story, the surprise little twist at the ending, is just a marvel you did all this storytelling in the words allotted!

Technically sound, wow, this is really good.
05/22/12
Good job. This needs to be a movie:)
05/24/12
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~