The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the title!

Thank you for this tender journey through the MC's mind and heart. It was perfectly on topic.

I liked the epiphany that sounded in her mind as she looked in the "mirror." Great significance in that whole scene. Great job.

God bless~
This is a great story. You did a nice job of building the conflict. I liked that you showed how one can go home again. Sure things aren't always the same but home welcomes us with open arms.
You have made me love the MC in both worlds. A wonderful story.

Keep writing!
This story is a real gem.

The way you lead into the story, the surprise little twist at the ending, is just a marvel you did all this storytelling in the words allotted!

Technically sound, wow, this is really good.
Good job. This needs to be a movie:)
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~