The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/12
I loved your segue into the beautiful scriptures. Very nice job with this short, but very powerful entry.

Great job. Thank you.

God Bless~
I so love this comparison of the two men. I think it is fresh and an original take on the topic.

The only read ink I have is when you are putting the Bible verse for reference have the period at the end of the sentence and not after the parentheses.

This is down in such a way it really makes the reader think about what is truly important in life. I think it is quite clever.
05/24/12
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~
YAY! Happy Dance! Congratulations on your beautiful ribbon. I'm so happy for you and I knew this piece would do well!
05/25/12
Oh, very nice job with this. I can see why it did well! My only suggestion would be to make it longer. :D